Continuing on our trail
of the easier line edits, let’s dive into the ‘extra words and filtering’ once
over.
Do you ever word things
using a few too many words? Maybe you burden your sentences with too many
descriptors or modifiers? Both of these things can mess with clarity in your
writing. There is something to be said for brevity. But I always struggle with
it because I love over complicating things. It’s just how my mind works when I
write my first drafts. So going through my sentences with a finger on the
delete key is essential.
Cutting filtering ties
into this. I did a big post on filtering here, but to sum up, it involves using
‘filters’ like ‘I saw, I heard, I think’ to connect the reader to the main
character. But these words really create distance and bog down your sentences.
Over all, this is a
simple edit, though it takes a careful eye to catch many of these errors. But
if brevity is the soul of wit, it’s also the driving force behind a
well-crafted manuscript.
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